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Broken by ~ChernaBot:iconChernaBot:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Song


This face, this face, this lovely face
Too beautiful for your eyes
My face, my face, my lovely face
Why won't you meet my eyes?

Born inside an acid womb
Gagging on a wicked tongue
How much longer would I last?
What on Earth has just begun?

Birthed onto the Summer sand
Choking on the weight of life
Hunks and mounds of flesh and bone
Dreams tear through me like a knife

Broken, I'm broken. I'm falling apart
Only eyes without a face
These toxic tears are meaningless
I am the Lord's finest disgrace

My face, my face, my lovely face
Why won't you meet my eyes?
These eyes, this flesh, this rotting mind
Why can I never die?
©2009 ~ChernaBot
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Author's Comments

This one was a pain in the ass to write, but I think it turned out fairly well.

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*Sho-Ku-Ten Mar 2, 2009, 6:03:30 PM
Wow, pretty intense. I'm never written a horror poem but after reading this I'm compelled to write one. I love the imagery. Awesome. :)

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~sin-script Jul 23, 2009, 12:44:38 AM
For some reason the image that came to mind while reading this was a harlequin fetus. Interesting poem. I like the usage of words.
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